I fall
hapless
hopeless
wholeheartedly
into
my
feminine ways
once again
I
fall
fast
flat
face first
into
my feminine
ways
Once
again
I
fall
far
from grace
further
from acceptance
into
my feminine
ways
Once again
I fall
through
this
mercury glass
life
into
my
oblivion
my
feminine
ways
Day 4 of 31
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Very smooth flowing... Liked the flow...
ReplyDeletethank you!
DeleteMercury glass life sounds fragile.
ReplyDeleteLiked the way this poem flows.
thank you!
DeleteI love your repetition, it really gives a punchiness to each stanza. Excellent
ReplyDeleteI saw the SF MOMA exhibit and was moved to tears - it was great inspiration.
DeleteLoved your poem, great write.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nithya!
DeleteThe repetition has a terrific spiraling effect
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